Monday, February 23, 2009

Press Release 5: Draft

Feb. 22, 2009
Contact info:
Thanksgiving Point
3003 N. Thanksgiving Way
Lehi, Utah 84043
Erica Brown
Director of Communications
801.768.7455
ebrown@thanksgivingpoint.com

Brides Hit Thanksgiving Point from All Sides

At Thanksgiving Point, our mission is to inspire the minds and renew the spirits of young and old by providing unique learning experiences, family-friendly entertainment, and opportunities for discovery in a safe and beautiful environment.
Thanksgiving Point Institute is a quality-of-life, education-based charity.
Created in 1996 by Alan and Karen Ashton, Thanksgiving Point is the gathering place for the rapidly growing communities along the Wasatch Front and throughout the state. The Ashton's untold generosity is unparalleled, and the result is this wonderful community resource.
In a world that is frenetic, over-programmed, and increasingly disconnected, Thanksgiving Point offers a respite from the demands and stress of daily living. With quality at the core of what we do, we contribute to the lives of individuals, families and communities by offering experiences that change lives through The Promise of Discovery.
Thanksgiving Point Gardens, the Children’s Discovery Garden, Farm Country, the Museum of Ancient Life, and the Emporium and restaurants offer stimulating and engaging experiences in a safe, family-friendly setting. They foster learning, bring families closer together and provide beautiful gathering places for groups of all kinds, giving them opportunities to share their cultural heritage and common bonds.


Madison Roderick
PR Manager
Thanksgiving Point
3003 N. Thanksgiving Way
Lehi, Utah 84043
823-324-6766

2 comments:

  1. I really like your idea for a story, and you've tied everything in well. I think you could maybe include a sentence or two about their facilities or amenities for weddings and brides themselves. Also, you might want to put the sentence about when they began in the boiler plate.
    Other than that I think it's golden!
    Nicole

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  2. I agree with Nicole you did a really nice job. I would also want to know what some of the amenities are at thanksgiving point. I would maybe expound on a couple of things also, but it looks really good.

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